So if we start with that idea that
here concept, a nutrition concept called a carbohydrate
you might actually
make both of those kinds of moves. What I'm suggesting is the pattern
that might make that easier for you is the "given-new" contract.
The notion that we begin with shared information
or shared ideas or shared knowledge and we move to
new information. And in definition that means
relative detail and then contrasted detail.
Sound good? So that's the pattern I want
to think about and work with and look for
as you do the review today. So use this as a resource
and try to help each other make better defining moves
in your draft. I'm going to ask you one other thing in the
in the review and that is
I'm gonna look to see, or I want you to look to see if there are concepts
or ideas or terms in the draft that
aren't defined and that you think could be or should be
I will stop you in a little while because I wanna talk about
what what the results are showing and
we'll do some more learning around these topics
"given-new" and contrastive and relative detail. Have fun.