Okay, so today we're gonna learn the difference between what's proficient here and what's
not proficient. And let's take a look at this paragraph and I can load in a sample paragraph
for them all to read and we can look at that, review that, and then we can look at and review
a paragraph that they will take from their own writing and place it in to and put them
side-by-side and then I can see right now whether they are picking up on that particular
move or not, and if we can move on to what's next or if we go back and say "okay, this
is what this looks like and this is good, or ehhhhh ... we're close but not quite here.
Let's think about this. Now let's try it again."